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Hi arturo, I really liked how you told the plot elements of your story. For what i think, that like a 3.8. It really made me interested in the book. The only problem is that you missed some parts of the plot. Something that was very impressive was how you described Alex. It seemed like if you know it from real life.

Hi felipe angarita, I really liked your book analysis. It was very complete and very very organized. You gave the exact information to make the book sound very interesting. Something that was very impressive, was your characterization part. Its very complete, full of details, with a lot of concert facts. It is very good, but if you could just add a little more information on the setting, it will be perfect!

Hi rafa, you did a good job at explaining the plot. It was very good, but short. I think that if you make It longer, you can start selling copies and win a lot of money because your book seems very good. Also you could add a little more to your characterization part.