domingo, 18 de septiembre de 2011

Outline

Introduction: Smithy is a 15 year old nerd, that has a perfect a perfect school record. He is very intelligent, and also is very good convincing people to do the things he wants. His beast friend is called Lorence, he is also very nerd, but no as much as smithy. 

Climax: this is when the school bullies, make Smithy get late to one class. This would destroy smithies perfect record: so he disides to go to zeus and ask him to take the tardy. Zeus tells smithy that the only way to change that tardy, was if he stole the notes from hades. Zeus gives him 2 special things that he would need in the voyage to hell.

Falling Action: Smithy has the notes, but hades sends his minions to kill smithy and lorence. Her is when smithy uses the 2 artifacts that suez gave him. 

Resolution: smithy understands that he has to maintain a balance in school and with the friends. he finds a girl friend, and at the end he goes to harvard.

1 comentario:

  1. Hi Bernie I think that you're outline was good but it could be longer you are missing the setting and to tell us how the author introduced the character but I think this is a good Outline If I hade to grade it in a scale from 1 to 10 it would be a 7.

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