poem FINISHED

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Independiente Santa fe

My favorite colombian team, is called independent Santa fe. the color of their shirt is red. They were the first to become champions of the cup ever. its really the best team in the whole country. this year we bought 5 great player to help us win this years championship. i really hope we can win.

storyboard poem

1. Finish poem

2. find pictures

3.make video

4. voice record

final draft poem

Groups,groups,groups how are they made?? That is a sacret we are going to dephrase

4 will start 2 will go up one will win and boom the price will come out

How to score you don’t know pass the ball through the goal with a speed of 1 or above

11 will play and with their positions you may go 3 away

Soccer is like my air without it I don’t dare to be there or a aquere away

ball ball ball

it runs faster than any player aver beat because of the pie in it

the sound it makes is light and it doesn’t bite

Ballack backed before the ball even bounced with it black circunfrence

Add the numbers, divide it by 3 ability power and speed player ranking is that deep

Depending on where your from and your score, you may be in a leage or more

a lot of money you will win many ceros depending of when and were you win

the field is as big as you sea the sea with 17 pairs of parralel lines

a sea of fans you can see but there are only 2 to 3 exponent 10,000

deffense is a Wall but i can break it with my canon ball of 50 milles above

the goal measure is 7 metters because one more is an exes and 6 is bit less

Booommm comes the goal

figurative language poem

Figurative lenguaje

Groups,groups,groups how are they made?? That is a sacret we are going to dephrase

(repetition)

4 will start 2 will go up one will win and boom the price will come out

(onamatopeia)

How to score you don’t know pass the ball through the goal with a speed of 1 or above

(assonance)

11 will play and with their positions you may go 3 away

(rhyme)

Soccer is like my air without it I don’t dare to be there or a aquere away

(rhyme)

ball ball ball

(repetition)

it runs faster than any player aver beat because of the pie in it

(assonance)

the sound it makes is light and it doesn’t bite

(personification)

Ballack backed before the ball even bounced with it black circunfrence

(alliteration)

Add the numbers, divide it by 3 ability power and speed player ranking is that deep

(rhyme)

Depending on where your from and your score, you may be in a leage or more

(assonance)

a lot of money you will win many ceros depending of when and were you win

(alliteration)

the field is as big as you sea the sea with 17 pairs of parralel lines

(simile) (hyperbole)

a sea of fans you can see but there are only 2 to 3 exponent 10,000

(hyperbole)

deffense is a Wall but i can break it with my canon ball of 50 milles above

(metaphor) (hyperbol)

the goal measure is 7 metters because one more is an exes and 6 is bit less

(rhyme)

Booommm comes the goal

(onomatopeia) 

poem thems

1:Groups how are they made

2:the points each one wins

3:basic information

4: the formations

5: player ranking

6: leagues

7:team ranking

8:tournement winning

9:goal

10: field measures

Rough draft

You go to the tv and see the goal but you don’t see the math behind the court.

Soccer is like my air without it I don’t dare to be there or anywhere even not in math class

The ball is the way top lay without it teres no air

It runs faster than any player aver beat because of the pie in it

11 will play and with their positions you may go 3 away

Groups, groups, groups how are they made?? That is a secret we are going to DE phrase

4 will start 2 will go up one will win and boom the price will come out

You go to the tv and see the goal but you don’t see the math behind the court.

To get your ranking Add the numbers, divide it by 3 ability power and speed

Depending on where you’re from and your score, you may be in a league or more

A lot of money you will win many ceros depending of when and were you win

Every match that you win you may add 3 big points or may stay as you are If you lose you may not pass

90 meters is the length of the field from left to right and if you measure the smaller side you will get 45

The goal measure is 7 meter’s because one more is an exes and 6 is bit less

To measure a team you have to divide it in tree defense, medium, attack that will give you the rank of the team

Ballack backed away before the ball even bounced

You go to the tv and see the goal but you don’t see the math behind the court.

coments

Felipe Angarita: you did an exelent job, but you have a few grammar mistakes. But how you show the literary elements with examples of your book, is very good

Samy fajardo: you did a very nice job, it seams like is you realy spend lots os time in your project, it also seams that you really understand the subject

Mariana Romero: You have a very clear and complete project, you show that you understand the elements very well. 

literary divises in my book (tintin)

Symbolism: Sadly there is no symbolism in my book, i think that the author tried to make a interesting book

Flasback: there is some flashback in the book. When tintin was in china, and he was investigating what happened in the Blue Lottos ( restaurant ), he has a flashback when he was in the embassy and a weird guy told him that he had some information for him. When he was about to start talking, they shoot him with a poisonous dart.

Atmosphere: the atmosphere is very tense, because it is a mystery book. A good example of the atmosphere, is when he is following the car, and enters the old train rail. It is a darck forest with a little fog. Also there are bad guys with guns tring to kill the little tintin.

Plot Twist: There is not a real clear example of a plot twist in the book, but the closest thing, is when he is finishing the investigation of the Blue Lottos, he finds out that one of the heads of the bad guys, is the owner of the Blue Lottos.

Foreshadowing: there is no foreshadowing in the book